Hey :) comments are welcome, although unexpected considering I don't crosspost anywhere lol although I am curious as to how you found me now, haha. I'm glad you liked it though, I can't say I'm the biggest fan of krisho, but their height difference is really cute :3
And don't worry about not giving crit like the person above, she's a friend and she wanted to practice giving crit just as much as I wanted to practice writing. A learning experience of sorts lol. That's another reason for the long a/n, this was a part of a series of challenge drabbles with a max word count and a deadline so every single word was carefully chosen. The long a/n acts as a reminder or a time-stamp of what I was thinking as I wrote this and also provides a clearer picture of what I meant to depict vs what I managed, so I could see for myself where I was lacking and where I need to improve. I hope it wasn't a bother to you while reading this lol.
(Also, I'm naturally quite wordy, as you can tell by this reply /o\)
But anyway, I'm glad you found this and I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for dropping by :3
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And don't worry about not giving crit like the person above, she's a friend and she wanted to practice giving crit just as much as I wanted to practice writing. A learning experience of sorts lol. That's another reason for the long a/n, this was a part of a series of challenge drabbles with a max word count and a deadline so every single word was carefully chosen. The long a/n acts as a reminder or a time-stamp of what I was thinking as I wrote this and also provides a clearer picture of what I meant to depict vs what I managed, so I could see for myself where I was lacking and where I need to improve. I hope it wasn't a bother to you while reading this lol.
(Also, I'm naturally quite wordy, as you can tell by this reply /o\)
But anyway, I'm glad you found this and I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for dropping by :3